1. Clear, pleasant speaking voice. 2. You included some interesting facts: that she and her mother lived in poverty, and that they sewed and made quilts to support themselves. 3. You covered almost all of the requested information
Weaknesses
1. You didn’t say anything about her role in the White House. 2. You didn’t include any additional interesting facts, other that the specific requirements asked for.
Flat tone and the flow is kind of choppy.
ReplyDelete-Brett B.
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ReplyDeleteStrengths
1. Clear, pleasant speaking voice.
2. You included some interesting facts: that she and her mother lived in poverty, and that they sewed and made quilts to support themselves.
3. You covered almost all of the requested information
Weaknesses
1. You didn’t say anything about her role in the White House.
2. You didn’t include any additional interesting facts, other that the specific requirements asked for.
Overall grade: B 26/30